tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post8165509540761160884..comments2023-09-09T00:37:05.338-07:00Comments on Tellin Tall Tales...: Chapter 2 - The Muffet DiariesSairekhahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01315402584142064271noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-8386126551856452892007-11-28T22:18:00.000-08:002007-11-28T22:18:00.000-08:00GIRL, WHERE ARE YOU? IS EVERYTHING ALRITE...U BETT...GIRL, WHERE ARE YOU? IS EVERYTHING ALRITE...U BETTER BE ON A VACATION OR SOMETHING..HOWS HUBBY'S WORKS? SAY HITys on Icehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09718530428063102986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-36922024696882358162007-11-24T07:40:00.000-08:002007-11-24T07:40:00.000-08:00Was the moon inspired by the whitening chewing gum...Was the moon inspired by the whitening chewing gum ad? :)<BR/><BR/>Loving it, Ziah-ji.Adorable Pancreashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05824201985240804750noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-55774773230829788412007-11-18T19:18:00.000-08:002007-11-18T19:18:00.000-08:00barin drain or strain??? Wehavent seen the muffets...barin drain or strain??? Wehavent seen the muffets for a very long time??Pratshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10849938760602815322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-31622132658271819292007-11-16T23:58:00.000-08:002007-11-16T23:58:00.000-08:00hye stud, u ok?...havent seen u arnd in a while......hye stud, u ok?...havent seen u arnd in a while...things are cool rite?Tys on Icehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09718530428063102986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-12346669357829824192007-10-30T03:08:00.000-07:002007-10-30T03:08:00.000-07:00me wnt more on Elijah the sleeping hobbit...wht u ...me wnt more on Elijah the sleeping hobbit...wht u doing? get with the programmeTys on Icehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09718530428063102986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-40088096379790294192007-10-29T21:01:00.000-07:002007-10-29T21:01:00.000-07:00Hi Ziah,Hats off for your imagination..Certain usa...Hi Ziah,<BR/><BR/>Hats off for your imagination..Certain usages like brush with betrayl, long-gone etc... realy deserves to be applauded...<BR/>If u intend to release it make it a lil bit of desi..for eg How Rowling made use of London in her Potterites, similarly concentrate on one particular city and introduce some desi words like for eg.for the degree u use the witch learns Indianise it...That will be very effective..<BR/>Anyway keep imagining...certain people have the potential to imagine but unfortunately not to pen...for others its the other way round... u have plus point over all of themmAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11768647010914451230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-5176772839472031262007-10-28T04:26:00.000-07:002007-10-28T04:26:00.000-07:00Very nice reading,light and with its own fun weave...Very nice reading,light and with its own fun weaved into it!!<BR/>TC<BR/>CUCompassion Unlimittedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14502484998131301949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-77437055489578887242007-10-24T11:23:00.000-07:002007-10-24T11:23:00.000-07:00hey, muppet!!, what happened to muffet?hey, muppet!!, what happened to muffet?Pratshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10849938760602815322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-69935445584559985982007-10-24T07:07:00.000-07:002007-10-24T07:07:00.000-07:00Little Bigger Miss Muffet has been lost in her tho...Little Bigger Miss Muffet has been lost in her thoughts quite long now ;)aMushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14191649124291527517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-71033674703564077272007-10-22T21:55:00.000-07:002007-10-22T21:55:00.000-07:00chapter 3 I need....chapter 3 I need....Pratshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10849938760602815322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-56488872262880388572007-10-21T04:31:00.000-07:002007-10-21T04:31:00.000-07:00No probs out there...just give me a day to recover...No probs out there...just give me a day to recover from the rotis , paneers, and bhaiyya ,cos thats where my vocabs end now....<BR/>And whats happening to the moons and the doughnuts??<BR/>Zapped like sleeping beauty??Pratshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10849938760602815322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-87549272457673258492007-10-19T23:57:00.000-07:002007-10-19T23:57:00.000-07:00I found this easier to go thru than the latest pos...I found this easier to go thru than the latest post in your other blog. wait a nimit, do I subconsciously have a thing for fantasy? <BR/><BR/>are you actually gonna publish this?love and squalorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04166819711065232633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-70421413940429820262007-10-18T03:45:00.000-07:002007-10-18T03:45:00.000-07:00hi again, i'm not totally sure i'll go on with the...hi again, i'm not totally sure i'll go on with the blog ;) might just go straight to the novel! still, my first novel should be coming out soon... see if you like it!Mia Makarandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16517906161531210329noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-19052494169818179312007-10-15T05:56:00.000-07:002007-10-15T05:56:00.000-07:00very sweet writing zia although i haven't had time...very sweet writing zia although i haven't had time to go through all the posts... but thanks for your comment on my celebrity interpreter blog. i guess i just might go back to it, now that some nice folks are showing interest! i have been thinking about it, so will keep you posted! all the best with your writing though and thanks again!Mia Makarandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16517906161531210329noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-58643763597728930882007-10-14T22:39:00.000-07:002007-10-14T22:39:00.000-07:00okie then...chapter 3 please ..u know something , ...okie then...chapter 3 please ..u know something , iam reading this like the hitchhikers guide...it has the same crazy sort of imagination...Tys on Icehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09718530428063102986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-77324453613770566232007-10-13T23:04:00.000-07:002007-10-13T23:04:00.000-07:00no probs..but u must realize iam someone who reall...no probs..but u must realize iam someone who really cant spell that well...just letteng..sorry, lettting...opps...letng...screw it...letting u know...there!Tys on Icehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09718530428063102986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-18389708544708588952007-10-11T00:33:00.000-07:002007-10-11T00:33:00.000-07:00@ Shre & Amita - thank you babes!! I'm getting mor...@ Shre & Amita - thank you babes!! I'm getting more and more convinced that I'm "off" the sanity line...:)<BR/><BR/>@ Prats - Thanks for the generosity in complimenting... erm.. babe,need favour... me been staring too much at my own draft, getting hard to identify tweak zones:)...(happens with my agreements also).. can you, wen u have the time, highlight the tweakable zones for me or something? Tys, et tu helps? Mebbe you guys ken mail it across.. will help me polish it up:)Thanks!<BR/><BR/>@D - God of Verbiage! Wah wah! Whelcome saar. :) And Thenku partner sahib! For all the help and advise.<BR/>I'll try toning down chap 3... if I get stuck, you're gonna lose one night's sleep ok... ramzan or no ramzan!! :)<BR/><BR/>@joy - Glad you like it! Trust me, you really boost my morale:)<BR/><BR/>@thinking aloud - thanks for dropping by... I guess I'm quite moony, so the whackjob ideas.. :) Glad u like it.. quite inspiring to make me write more:)<BR/><BR/>@Tys - hey! Thanks for the review. I could so use the profession shift.. in time maybe, wen Viv makes a lotta money..:) <BR/>Hehe, I like Elijah too.. lets see what I can do with him:)<BR/><BR/>Meanwhile, like I pointed out to Prats, ichchiri help cheyyan pettuo? :)Sairekhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01315402584142064271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-32818341264673065122007-10-11T00:01:00.000-07:002007-10-11T00:01:00.000-07:00ziah, u r really gud at this...time to rethink ur ...ziah, u r really gud at this...time to rethink ur profession..its amazing...cant wait to see wht happens mext...i hope elijah figures more later on...i like a guy who can cause widespread chaos by playing hooky with his job....<BR/><BR/>loving it...keep it comingTys on Icehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09718530428063102986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-59568611742841734792007-10-10T17:42:00.000-07:002007-10-10T17:42:00.000-07:00***incandescent doughnut shaped moonette!!***how d...***incandescent doughnut shaped moonette!!***how did u ever think of that???<BR/>Great imagination...:)aMushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14191649124291527517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-9135277677418783722007-10-09T06:54:00.000-07:002007-10-09T06:54:00.000-07:00Splendid! You have a way of weaving the timeless c...Splendid! You have a way of weaving the timeless classic characters into this nice enchanting story.Jayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05053043951887070129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-17237775310071496262007-10-09T05:00:00.000-07:002007-10-09T05:00:00.000-07:00Spectacular imagination and vivid story telling, n...Spectacular imagination and vivid story telling, not to mention side splitting literary allusions...<BR/><BR/>I like the dark and steely side you're showing....<BR/><BR/>But maybe, just maybe....simpler english ?? You're not sitting down with a dic, I know...but the rest might not think so...<BR/><BR/>Keep it coming...dgoswami1979https://www.blogger.com/profile/06497337806216907980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-33525734517830178242007-10-09T04:59:00.000-07:002007-10-09T04:59:00.000-07:00*he was a part of the torch-bearer elves that shon...*he was a part of the torch-bearer elves that shone torches on the moonette to light it up* ...that was precious. <BR/> Your way of leading in the characters into the tale is amazing. There could be a little bit of polish, to make it crisper. Its weaving itself blissfully....waiting to see what happens.Pratshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10849938760602815322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-45101620029871327212007-10-09T03:25:00.000-07:002007-10-09T03:25:00.000-07:00Me too! loved the moon n the mother's betrayal! en...Me too! loved the moon n the mother's betrayal! enjoyed this chapter even more than the first one..keep them coming!!wasphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08996384282626771892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6813180849673210729.post-75858288220728594362007-10-09T02:40:00.000-07:002007-10-09T02:40:00.000-07:00Heheh, love the doughnut moon and the Witca! Can't...Heheh, love the doughnut moon and the Witca! Can't wait to read more!Shreyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08702372942136225715noreply@blogger.com